by JJ May 14, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
first love
We built a house, piece by piece |
by Colm
This is a good effort. The only thing I would say is not to say directly 'love is a huose,' especially as the title, as it makes the poem to obvious and takes some of the interest away. Other than that it was a good effort, keep it up |
Wow, very good i like how yu compared love to a house very creative and very true. good poem! |