Break the silence

Break the silence, scream aloud, silence kills, but your voice will lead to their awakening.
Don't you see?
Its not if only walls could talk,
its if only you would break the silence,
break the chains someone else put upon your wrists.
reveal the bruises and rise above all of this.
break the silence but not alone,
i will scream with you when your voice begins to falter,
and i will hold you up into the light when you begin to get too comfortable among the darkness,
so come break the silence with me, and we will rise above all of this.

(need help, plz comment suggestions, i want a better ending b/c the ending seems to smooth and calm i want an urgent ending that calls for action, but I'm having trouble writing that)