Wow. i must say very powerful, most of all this line "Like thorn-covered vines tearing at my flesh" it was brilliant. you are a wonderful writter and you get better with time. it's hard to criticize something i loved.

HS

WOW! This piece is amazing. Its got so much emotion and so many different thoughts. It makes people think and its so in depth as well as creative... my gosh I think I'm speechless over this piece.