Comments : Space

  • 13 years ago

    by momopixie18

    !! i truelly loved the use of symbols! was cute and different.
    Space
    Like this [ ]
    ---makes me think of times when you really just cant hint at something, you need to just say what it is you need.
    sending letters
    written in my mind.
    ---very relatable
    Unreachable
    Still awaiting a response
    The remote is on pause
    and time has stopped.
    ---time stops when the one you love is unreachable.
    Your absence
    make me stronger
    prepares me for the
    inevitable heartbreak
    --i completly understand this, and a strong view to have, and just say that this is making me stronger
    Space
    How much?
    [ ] or [ ]
    It feels more like [ ]
    - between us -
    ----again, i just though the use of symbols is cute, good for you because i havent seen anyone else use this