Woooooooo
i like this one
nice write and i agree with eric it seems romantic first but it changed later
well done

I really like the melancholy tone of this piece. I also enjoyed the fine imagery of the swaying curtains, the diamond-shaped light, the golden necklace, and so on.

The second stanza was a bit confusing, as if it is a dream within a dream. But it is definitely a worthwhile read, even if the reader doesn't fully grasp when waking reality ends and the dreams begin.

Love your word choice. You always know how to pick a good word to describe something, you do it effortlessly. Loved the imagery as well. Like Kiko said it was melancholy but still beautiful in a way. Such a refreshing piece dear, not sure how I missed this one. Hope to see you writing more soon. The site needs more poems like this. -Nik

I could visualise all the imageries dear...the phrase NIGHT'S BREATH was felt..

Loved the stimulating, exciting tone of this piece, not to mention the turning point of this poem. The trick you've used was perfect, I was able to clearly visualize that curtains and the two of you in that room. :D

Congrats on the win :D A well-deserved one!

Congrats on the win dear :] nice to see some new people win for once. -Nik

Great free flow. I could not ask for more datailed imagery that came from your very soul... I like it

'and dreamed I could give you my dream'.....wow i love this line the most. To weave a dream for someone else perhaps to let the person know just how much they really mean, is touching. All in all, a wonderful piece here.

Although a wee late, congrats on the win. :-) Peace.

Grace.

Congrats on the win; definitely well-deserved on this poem. I must admit I loved the description that you put into this poem and also the imagery was just amazing. I really could feel myself in this poem.

5/5

-Heather

Paints a picture. Great write.