Comments : Pour yourself

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    My favorit part : This world is a Mystery,
    so why don't you create your own History,
    I really liked it :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Areeba

    I think its paint not pain ... *typo* ... :) .. well i liked it a lot.. for a starter this one is pretty cool.. nice write.. keep writing.. =)
    Greetings,
    Princess Of Damned

    • 12 years ago

      by Jawwad Zafar

      Thanx for correction.. I never read it after writing :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Great piece. Short but full of meaning:)
    Keep writing more",

  • 12 years ago

    by Akerele1 Segun22

    You hold my tongue and won't let me say much by how you've been able to write much in just a few lines. This is a great piece,my powerful comrade. Keep it up!

    • 12 years ago

      by Jawwad Zafar

      For an amature writer like me these comments are very special for me..
      thank you v.much.. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by With This Slow Tune I Tell You Goodbye

    Lol this is cute lol im sorry it's just cute and funny to me im sorry lol
    5/5 tho
    Lady Anastasia