by Jawwad Zafar May 16, 2011
category :
Life, society /
about society
Don't hold high your fingers to blame others, |
by With This Slow Tune I Tell You Goodbye
True poem and i quite agree sweety good poem |
by Loosened Locks
I like this alot - Good advise, word of the wise, I will try to keep this in mind - I find it really useful and appropiate! :) |
by Jawwad Zafar
Thanxx for likin my short poem... :) |
Ur good :) perfect rhyming too :) 5/5 |
by Jawwad Zafar
Thanxx i'll try to improve myself next time.. :) |
by Jenni
This may be short but that does not effect the fact that i think it is alright. I liked the repetition and the message, though you could of stated it a bit more detailed. |