by Captain Lonesome May 16, 2011
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
I see them broken, filthy, com to rest in squalor |
by Domino0792
Interesting read and I look forward to seeing more from you. Cheers! |
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Amazing poem, full of life and powerful emotion. Loved the use of wording throughout it. One of the better poems I have read, amazing job. Thanks for commenting on my work. 5/5 |
by Autuumnbree
This poem is very touchy and love is unconditional. I like the pain, the love and hope that is expressed in this piece...GJ |
by anand singh
This is indeed a passsionate piece that tells the story of our saviors love for us.Well done.Thanks for reading my poem. |
This is very well written I would not change a think .. very powerful |