This is brilliant there is nothing more I can say.

You know you are really good at writing this, all I could imagine is how much children will like this type of reads. Liked the write :)

This priceless well written poem becons me to look for a deeper meanig to its humor

I am impressed

I did enjoy this perfect flowing pissant poem. Thanks for posting!

Must agree with everyone. The rhyming scheme is priceless. The flow is very fluid and does not distract the readers from the poem itself. Splendid job.

Haha.. I have to admit that I feel like a 5 year old when I'm reading this. I like it. It made me smile. I like the rhymes. It sort of like a song but a huge one.
I dont know if it will be helpful to divide it into stanzas. But I do know that like the poem as a whole.

Wow!fabulous..niece poem emotionally written, i rate it 5/5

Thanks for telling me about this,

It was very funny, not sure what the hell was going on in the end, but I suspect that was part of its charm.

Very clever and there is a good message under all that humour.

This is definately your niche. good write