I nreally loved the first part, And this second one is even better .. I loved the story sooooo much :)

How do you do it?! how do you manage to write such amazing pieces that never fail to leave me stunned!! I read this poem like five times because its so good!! I truly believe you're one of the most talented poets on this site!! the imagery you use in your words is so vivid and real, its like an art work with the most intricate details. yet again, another truly amazing piece!! really wish I could give you a vote of more than just a five because you deserve it!!

I adore this poem, the story is really well writen and I really like the choice of words, keep it up :)

I think i'm in love with this well written poem, it's Amazing how it sounds like a piece from a Vampire book. Keep doing the Great job.