Stifled by smiles.

by Sean   May 18, 2011


Mashed cliches rehearsed to obvious ends;
this tired writer bleeds wretched non-imagination.
Words splattered and choked without direction,
I dread these happy days, writing is for the sad.

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Sean, 2011.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow this is amazing. It is short but cool. Nice job

  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Haha I love this. Particularly because when im in a super happy mood, I can never write.
    Well done. :D

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    *couches = cliches

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Mashed cliches rehearsed to obvious ends;
    ^^^ Mashed and rehearsed. ... interesting combination

    this tired writer bleeds wretched non-imagination
    ^^^ Yet you do not rely on couches at all

    I dread these happy days, writingr is for the sad.
    ^^^ & there you hook us - well done
    ( PS typo on writing )

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really enjoyed this. I don't think I've read any of your work before but this makes me want to read more. I'm always excited when I find someone who can say so much in so little words. Very powerful poem. Thanks for sharing. -Nik