Tqvm Nu Dash, I'll take that as a compliment to improve it later.

The last 4 lines of this poem were just !!!!!!

Hye Samia, Were just what?do have any idea to make it sound good?Neway tq for the feedback=)

This is amazing its excaly how i feel i love it

This is amazing its excaly how i feel i love it

Thank You NightIsTheNewDay, the rain do inspire me a lot=)