I agree with Nano. This was very well done :] I loved the first stanza the most though. Glad to see you writing again :] hope to see more from you soon. -Nik

Good to see you writing again Raj and this poem with just a few words sums up life and your feelings I guess..I liked the first two stanzas the most...good job!

A very interesting way to try and come out of writers block but I think the poem is creative none the less! Your poem flowed smoothly from line to line and the structure was really good as well. The images that came up in my mind when I read this were solid as your poem had a good central theme and it didn't get off track so much. Your mind is obviously trying to find something to grasp at for inspiration and if you keep this up you may find yourself out of your writing block!!! :D

"-Embroidered -
Smileys and Dreams
at the seams"

This was my favorite stanza and I loved how the last two lines rhymed. It went together perfectly and it seemed so natural. Not forced at all. Also the imagery is really good as well giving the reader something to see and visualize.

All in all, this poem was a very creative way to attempt a move on from writers block. I know I got into one not to long ago and I couldn't write anything. This will have to be something I will try to do in the future next time a writers blocks attacks my mind. Anyway the poem was really good a creative and I can't wait to see what you do next. Great job and keep writing!