This is very sweetnicely rhymed, spelling out all the things a marriage should have with a good flow.

the only thing i would point out is that half way in you say:
"He's the one in my life
that i will walk down the isle and say i do"
which would imply that you havent yet, then at the end identify him as already being your husband. minor but i noticed it thats all.

This is so sweet...
so sweet it almost brought tears to my eyes.. cant wait for you to post more poems...

Nz0 i wrote this poem at the beginning of our relationship and then finished it 2 weeks later after we got married so it was kind of a 2 yr process lol