by Lady Nik May 22, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You are everything to me, |
I've read lots of poems that say "you're my everything" in fact have said those words myself. But you brought it to a whole new light :-) Interesting write that I enjoyed and very very original |
by mandy
A beautiful heart wrenching write. The last stanza was so well crafted. |
by Colm
I liked parts of this, it was quite interesting. But as I read I saw some things that I would change if it were my poem, so I said I would tell them to you. Sometimes the line structure seems a little random and off-putting. For example: |
by Milo
I loved it. Its a magnificent write. |
by Decayed
I admired the closing and the opening.. What a wonderful piece! |