Insignificance.

by Courageous Dreamer   May 23, 2011


You stripped me of my identity,
leaving my heart uprooted
yet I still feel bounded to you
through dandelion freckled fields,
copper leaves skimming
pavements, wind chimes clattering,
perhaps a rotted apple scoured by ants -
insignificance.

I traipse onward, yet still,
all I see reminds me
of you;

I'm insignificant.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Belle

    Word choice is absolutely beautiful. <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This was awesome made me think of a relationship that's gone bad but you are still strong i loved it loved the title to p&l midnight sky

  • 12 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Liked! 5/5 for U!

  • 12 years ago

    by *emmax*

    The first two lines!
    No better start

    You stripped me of my identity,
    leaving my heart uprooted

    And the last two lines!
    No better finish

    all I see reminds me
    of you;
    I'm insignificant.

    So beautiful,so real

  • 12 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Wonderful write! 5/5

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