by Britt
As I told you before, I love love love this. |
by The Queen
Temps, I love your style now :D |
by Lonely Rider
The imagery is absolutely beautiful ... |
by Meena Krish
Reading this creates a sense of loneliness...been surrounded by many things that is noticed except for the person who is there by the side..touching write and well written! |
by Sincuna
The way you opened the poem was fine but the metaphors you used doesn't seem to compile the whole poem together. |
by Decayed
Wow this was awesome, my best of the three winners -- i liked the apple dragged by ants image :) |
by Narphangu
I love how this poem begins like you're talking about a person, but as it unfolds, your words show a different intention. Though at first it's confusing, the whole of the piece fits together like a puzzle pointing towards your meaning. I think this could be interpreted in many different ways, but I believe you're talking about a storm, yes? Perhaps a tornado? |
I love it |
by Jad
Well, I am finally getting around to your poetry. I have been busy but it looks like you haven't let you talent diminish any. This poem kept a strong central idea and I love the imagery you use to describe your surroundings. The emotions in this poem are sad and mostly isolated and one can feel the intensity of your lines. |
by Kips2.0
Lovely and witty. Well fashioned words with pictures well painted. Good poem! |
by yogi73
Leaving my heart uprooted |
by Half Husband Half father
Hats off 5/5 hv no wrds great job |
I like your poem and the emotion in it and I like that you used metaphors to glide through it |
The words seem to just roll off my tounge as if i wrote them myself, it brings to light a feeling i have tried to forget and yet i love feeling it now having read it formed so perfectly... and now you have me being poetic w/out meaning lol only the best ever do :P |
by XxLastHopexX
I love the imagery invoked in this poem. I didn't just feel, I saw. Well done. |
Bravo, truly excellent imagery and word choice from the very start through to the end. |
by zach wolff
My favorite poem on here so far. 5/5 |
by Skyfire
Wonderful write! 5/5 |
by *emmax*
The first two lines! |
Liked! 5/5 for U! |