Spectacular!.. The idea was good, and it was conveyed well :)
Good job

Thank you! I appreciate your praise. =)

Beautiful.

A beautiful poem....
I would like it if u read mine as well

This is amazing!! i love it alot!!

I really enjoyed reading this. I love the repeating lines, and imagery of this poem.
5/5 Keep writing :)

-X

This was really neat. Definitely got the imagination rolling. When I was reading this I could picture the night. Then "trying to fly through it but your senses fall" was really neat. Cause that's how it happens. Then I love the imagery of the ocean. Oceans are so vast and deep. And comparing them to rocking the person to sleep was really cool. All in all great job. :)

Your use of the rhyme scheme, ABA throughout is a nice touch, as is the 10 syllables per line. To finish this piece with an extra 'A' rhyme was fitting to this thought-out form.
We can be the master of our dreams, exploring wonderous world's of reality. Escaping the reality of life is understandable, especially at the moment, so although written some years back it still holds true today.

Nice work.