A Whisper

by bibbi   May 25, 2011


"I was dead yet I became alive,
I was separated yet i became reunited,
I was a tear yet i became a smile,
I was half yet I became whole
I was darkness yet I became a light
I was a drop yet i became an ocean
I was lost yet I was found
I was pain yet I became the cure for you.
You can't escape from me,
yet i can be away from you
if you don't know how to keep me true!"
Whispered Love to me one night in my ear.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    I like the Idea pretty much !

    A very good read indeed, I just had a couple of comments that I'd like to draw your attention to.

    I think it could have been better to say became light and instead of 'a light'

    Another point 'a drop'

    I think it could have been stronger if you mentioned what kind of drop you are like a drop of ... rain for example ! you know what I mean.

    Other than that I think it is really good :) Waiting for you next write !