I like the Idea pretty much !

A very good read indeed, I just had a couple of comments that I'd like to draw your attention to.

I think it could have been better to say became light and instead of 'a light'

Another point 'a drop'

I think it could have been stronger if you mentioned what kind of drop you are like a drop of ... rain for example ! you know what I mean.

Other than that I think it is really good :) Waiting for you next write !