Comments : Just Forget

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    I like this, i think its really good. simple yet enjoyable to read, a lot enjoyable to actually hear the song i bet. anyways, awesome. keep it rockin! :D

  • 13 years ago

    by rayre words

    I can see the potential song in this one - as you say in your profile; that's your style/intention with the poems you write.
    I'm voting for this of course, but a friendly suggestion? Place the first word "(chorus)" immediately above the verse you intend to use for the chorus.
    re:
    (chorus)
    place verse here

    I've played guitar and sung for years, and this is pretty good.