Forever Scars

by H. Elizabeth   May 26, 2011


Forever I have these scars of pain and loss.
They will always be engraved in my skin.
They will never disappear.
Neither will my pain.
Forever I have these scars of my hatred and anger.
Always seeing what I did to myself.
Forever running my fingers across my body feeling the wounds.
These scars will last forever.

Forever Scars.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I like the shortness of this write....as if the length of your scars cannot even begin to be described. My only suggestion would be to improve the flow, at first you have choppy lines that could have better punctuation maybe? Comma's instead of periods?
    Otherwise, simple, you didn't go into phenomenal depth or the detail of your story, but you could still see that surface of pain.

    God's blessings.

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