This is a very powerful story missy! Wow...you're an increadibly strong young woman. Extremly brave! My comment about this piece is, this felt more like a story, than a poem. Id try working on the structure of it & simply some of what you're saying so it could come together a little better.

Overall, nice job! 4/5

This sounds more like a story, than a poem.
It needs some work. I like it, but its not a poem.

4/5