Comments : Oleaginous

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Placid colors mingle and twist,
    Each stroke carries magnificent risk.
    Set aside each fear and worry,
    Let the brush tell a story.

    ^^
    My favorite stanza:)

    One does get lost in a painting somtimes..and in painting it too, I guess, lol.

    I smiled about the risk of addding a new color, because it is indeed risky, but maybe that is also the charm of doing it, I feel.

    Although this was a rhyming poem, it was not boring in the least, I loved the melodious feel of it.

    Nice work, Amanda!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is remarkable! I love the imagery and the way you portrayed them.

    "Placid colors mingle and twist,
    Each stroke carries magnificent risk."

    I really liked this line. A lot. :-)

    Also, I didn't know the word oleaginous before I read this. ^.^ So, thanks for using it correctly so I can too haha. =p 5/5

    Bri~

  • 13 years ago

    by Matt

    Another excellent write, has a really nice flow to it 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    This paints beautiful pictures in my mind!! nice job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Vanesa

    Whoa, I've never read a piece such as this one. Your words flow so cleverly and captivatingly.
    'Let the brush tell the story.'
    So many good stanzas, that's my favorite line though.