Comments : Benevolence

  • 13 years ago

    by rayre words

    I love everything about this creation!
    But the final verse describes the door of the heart suddenly opening (again), to allow love to be acknowledged and accepted.
    Really warming to my heart! Thanks for the sharing. Ray

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I'm very new to writing but I have to say that your work is amazing! I really love the flow, this one hit me deep . Thankyou :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Very good great flow and straight from the heart 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by NOTWORTHLIVING

    Very intersting poem reminds me of a drk love poem

    isnt lady antabellum metal

  • 12 years ago

    by Vanesa

    'Raw truths, painful realizations, self reflections, unsheathed disbelief, standing in a pool of dirty souls
    numb from the pressure of existing.'

    Holy... Whoa. Your writing amazes me. You put me in a place and whirl my mind, I never knew... Wow.

    That stanza is great! It speaks to me as I feel this was written for me. :0

    'These walls haven't stood the test of time
    built in an eager time of defense,'
    ^^^
    That's my favorite line. Something similar to that is tattooed on my back.