I love the modernity of this. It could almost be a rap and I could imagine it being shared aloud with emotion and intense honesty. Of course the theme is as old as Humanity itself but to each hurt lover that pain is unique. Thats the strength of this, it tells an old story through fresh eyes, bravo.

Good poem, nicely worded. It flowed good but it might be better if you broke it up in to a couple of stanzas. Other then that I liked it.

5/5