by Salina Is Beautiful Jun 2, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You hurt me so bad |
by Jenni
The emotions in this poem are really powerful, I think that it flows quite well and the rhymes were not obvious. You definately described the feeling really well and I think this is a good poem. |
I feel this wat, everyday and every night, i want it to end, i want not to fight..... i loved your poem |