That first line was wonderful :] very well written piece with such beauitful images. -Nik

One of my favorite forms and you did a good job with it.

I have to say, this is one of the hardest forms I think I've ever seen. I've never tried it, I'm quite afraid of it, and am always marveled when I see people such as yourself write a piece like this, that looks so effortless.

This is gorgeous formed poetry, if I didn't know what the form was I would have a hard time distinguishing the idea of it. It's not often you read a palindrome where it's not choppy or uneven, lines don't flow etc, but here each and every word meant something, had a specific feeling and flowed together so brilliantly. I am truly impressed and amazed! :)