Wow, this was alluring - literally.
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(A reflection of emptiness he was
His life always put on pause)
- This opening is marvelous, my favorite two verses that can sum it all..

The metaphors were incredible.. They gave way to a really dark flow. It was capturing. There is a leakage of wicked yet saintly emotions of that man. You conveyed his character flawlessly.

Every stanza ignites the senses, believe me.
The words you've used were in the right place.
The closing was also good.

A job, awesomely done!
"5/5"
If I have the ability to nominate it, I would have instantly.
It was my pleasure to read such a piece. =D

- Peace
~ Abed ~

This is a very beautiful and heart warming poem. It truly is amazing. It captured not only my heart but my soul as well.

That's an amazing poem.you can actually feel the experience

"Surviving the temptations to live
In a world that takes, but never gives"

oh how true your words really are.

amazing.