Faking happiness

by Misshapenheart21   Jun 3, 2011


Hiding behind the smile
covering up the pain
i don't want to cry now
but sometimes it's got to rain
I know that I've already lost you
but I'm still gonna fight
and since I'm always lonely
I'll cry myself to sleep at night

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  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Very nicely written - short and to the point.
    Nice use of metaphor and rhyme.
    Great flow.
    I can definitely relate - though who wouldnt?!
    But we must also remember to show our true emotions even if it raises unwanted questions or attention. In the long run, talking it out actually can help and its better to have sorted things out asap then try to deal with it on out own only to endure the pain and tears for longer..
    Beautifully written. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Dezi

    I can really relate to this, it's a very strong poem in my eyes. Very well written it will go in my favorites (:

  • 13 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Its true so many cn relate to this, nicely written, i really like the end. 5/5.
    xkimx

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Such a deep and emotional write...
    Can relate so much

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