Comments : The Prince

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Hi, I like the images this poem portrays but,

    what is the first comma for?

    Should it be;

    Sunset rays kiss of infinite time?

    Or

    Sun sets, rays kiss of infinite time?

    Or should I mind my own business?!!!

    I like the last line, can be interpreted in a number of ways.

    regards

    Darren

    • 12 years ago

      by Giegielove Goddess Poet

      Hi, thanks for the comment, i forgot to review
      that piece, the comma must be not on that line...

      ~Giegielove Goddess Poet~