I'm Fine

by PinkyPrincess   Jun 5, 2011


"I'm Fine"
the most commonly repeated lie,
the answer to a thoughtless question.
They ask how you are doing
but expect an easy answer.

"I'm Fine"
the more you say it,
the more you believe it.
It's eating up your heart
piece by piece, it becomes hollow.

"I'm Fine"
Widen the aching half smile
and laugh at silly jokes.
You can convince the world,
but convincing yourself is the hardest.

"How are you?"
people ask this question daily
but the answers could be false.
They may never even know
how you are anything - but fine.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I love how you write, pure and simple - beautiful, that is a comment from a true novice but i have to say it's epic :-))

    would you be as kind to look at one of mine, i am very new to all this and would really like to know what you think.

    Kindest Regards

  • 13 years ago

    by Aish

    I bet this poem resonates in the hearts of more people than you'd hope.
    Very outright and simple in your portrayal, definitely get the point across lovely, loved the ending, very true. I know I've felt exactly as you've painted more than once.

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    This poem was amazing! I loved the stanza where you described the feeling of being hollow very nicely done. It relates to all people because we all have felt that way before. Great job. :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    Gosh this was awesome.. I fell in love with this verse wet with pain!!

    "I'm Fine"
    the more you say it,
    the more you believe it.
    It's eating up your heart
    piece by piece, it becomes hollow.

    and the ending was epic!
    Awesome job

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