Gosh this was awesome.. I fell in love with this verse wet with pain!!

"I'm Fine"
the more you say it,
the more you believe it.
It's eating up your heart
piece by piece, it becomes hollow.

and the ending was epic!
Awesome job

This poem was amazing! I loved the stanza where you described the feeling of being hollow very nicely done. It relates to all people because we all have felt that way before. Great job. :-)

I bet this poem resonates in the hearts of more people than you'd hope.
Very outright and simple in your portrayal, definitely get the point across lovely, loved the ending, very true. I know I've felt exactly as you've painted more than once.

I love how you write, pure and simple - beautiful, that is a comment from a true novice but i have to say it's epic :-))

would you be as kind to look at one of mine, i am very new to all this and would really like to know what you think.

Kindest Regards