My biggest suggestion would be to go back and thoroughly check your grammar/spelling and the word understanding, sometimes you used plural instead of singular forms; it makes the piece harder to flow and understand.

Go further into detail with the mistake between the lion and lamb. Yes the reader can guess the connection, but what about this love that you wanted? Were you the victim of abuse? Who was who? I just don't feel the intrigue here.

You display a great deal of emotions- but delve deeper into your heart's stirring. I did like the end about the nightmares continuing, but give the reader more sense about the realness of what is chasing you.

God bless.
Please keep writing.

Thankyou for the comment i will keep it in mind while i am writing.

You really should keep writing. I felt as if this poem spoke to me & that is what poems should do. :)

I cant seem to stop reading your poems now that I started. You are a Magnificent writer. This poem is great.