Comments : Lies Inside The Truth [Senryu]

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    As Cinda said its like a chant to make one's heart ready to speak the truth..good job!

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I thought this was unique and brilliant! I like how it can mean two different things given the way you read it. Very nicely done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    What a word play :D
    interesting read :D love how meaning changes :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Love Panda

    I absolutly loved this poem. I thought the double meaning whammy was great - and you used it well with "lies".