by Mohammad AlQadi Jun 7, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I can't share love! It's an energy too essential to exhaust.. |
by jescelle
I like how you used "Exhaust" and "Holocaust". Very nice! Again though, this feels like an unfinished thought, as though you wanted to say more but stopped yourself short. Don't be afraid to harness the power of 4 line stanza's, and maybe lengthen your pieces as well. This one was great though! |