by Mohammad AlQadi Jun 7, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Death .. is it my fear or is it my longed for dream? |
by jescelle
Hey! This feels unfinished somehow, and some of the rhythms are a little off, but your ideas and metaphors are great! Keep writing about this topic for practice, and I'd suggest you take a minute to focus on the flow and imagery a little more, but overall this was really good! Keep it up! |