by Sunshine Jun 8, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I tired the hours wandering |
by Naughtymouse
Ms Sunshine i truely love your poem i have written a few but only one do i have posted on this site would you be so kind as to read it for me and give me your thoughts - i ask because your poem reach inside me and i would really lke to hear from someone who can truely write what they think of my verse |
by Jad
This was deffinetly one of your more colorful poems with a lot more imagery that really brings out the sadness in this piece. :] Your word choice is always good as you try and refrain from using too many big words that might mess up the flow since I woulld have to quit reading and see what that word meant. :P So good job keeping it simplistic for me. ;] Many emotions and metaphors that I found very heart wrenching. |
by Sincuna
"wandering |
by Sunshine
Perfect analysis :) |
by Britt
I absolutely love that first stanza, and thought it was the best with the images and the sadness. You, just as the trees and birds are alone, without any specific place to call your home. A drifter. |