by DirtRoadGirl Jun 8, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I see the way you look at her, |
by DirtRoadGirl
Aha I got tired half way through this one and my computer was frezzing :P this was my first one I'm pretty sure :) but thank you |
Few little tweaks needed but all in all still a stunning piece 5/5 |
by DirtRoadGirl
Thank you :) |
This poem was amazing. I wanted to keep reading more, haha. Rythym in some stanzas were off but other than that it was a lovely peice. Keep it up. :) 5/5 |