"Ruby rid lips"

I think you mean red :)

Have you seen the new Xmen movie? Your bit about venomous poison, glacial kisses etc reminds me of the evil chick on there. She was Miss Frost or whatever... very seductive, beautiful...but evil. Lol

I LOVE the use of "putrid" in this poem as well.

I like the second half of this piece more than the first..probably due to the feeling of intensity and passion. It's dark and evil and seductive. A beautiful combination!