I know What It's Like

by nicole natalie   Jun 9, 2011


I know What It's Like to feel alone in the world
I know What It's Like when you want to say what you're going through but you just cant say a word
I know What It's Like to want so much
to rely on someone but you just cant
I know What It's Like when everyone say
"What is so wrong in your head?"
I know What It's Like when nobody cares Why you cry
I know What It's Like to Fail over and over again
but you still want to try
I know What It's Like when you just dont wanna
live anymore
and Every day that passes the pain grows
a litlle more....

this is my first poem so i hope you like it
and I'm sorry if there are spelling mistakes
English is not my native language

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  • 13 years ago

    by nicole natalie

    I'm sorry if there are spelling mistakes just English is not my native language

  • 13 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Keep writing and expressing yourself. It's a good first poem. I struggled in a couple of parts with the flow, but overall I enjoyed and liked the repetition of "I know What It's Like"

  • 13 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    I know what it feels...when you feel real good! You communicated your feelings in plain simple words. Good job!

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Good attempt at a first poem i thought it was good there was a few lil spelling mistakes and the flow was a bit choppy but a good first write keep going ... read poems and ask for help and it will help you kepp writing x

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I loved it it was perfect great job :) 5/5

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