Gud job,natalie..write sm more on topic like new love..

I like it... coz I also know how it likes. A beautiful start to your writing...Well done!!! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

I loved it it was perfect great job :) 5/5

Good attempt at a first poem i thought it was good there was a few lil spelling mistakes and the flow was a bit choppy but a good first write keep going ... read poems and ask for help and it will help you kepp writing x

I know what it feels...when you feel real good! You communicated your feelings in plain simple words. Good job!

Keep writing and expressing yourself. It's a good first poem. I struggled in a couple of parts with the flow, but overall I enjoyed and liked the repetition of "I know What It's Like"

I'm sorry if there are spelling mistakes just English is not my native language