The Lies Ill Concealed

Jenn,

This was different by you. I enjoyed the sarcastic nature as always. The black humor with the blender images and the contrasting the word cliche against sadness was an interesting twist. I was fond of the ending, starved love is an intriguing term you don't hear too often in poetry, well at least I don't anyway. That was probably my favorite part, the idea of nutrients to survive. I liked how you show strength with the concept of a phoenix rising, and the word victorious is also a great word that describes your personality. You do always end up victorious in my opinion due to your strength.

I thought it interesting how you used the word cliche and yet wrote cliche words in order to reinforce this idea, if you hadn't of I would of thought that perhaps some choices of wording were too common but I know you and your nature of portraying things sarcastically definitely shined through.

You ended 'Cliche' with a full stop, therefore 'all' in the third stanza should be capitalized.

Nice work,
-Mel.