Waw, I am pretty pretty impressed actually, as your opening lines were not so motivating but I wanted to continue reading and then I came across some of the most unique lines ever, very deep, very sensual, I dislike how it's all a bold huge piece that could have dazzled me, but I ended up being dazzled by the beauty of the poem itself

I would nominate such a poem for the weekly contest but SADLLy it was posted at 2011-06-10..and not eveen noticed!!! how sad...this is a master piece with some edits, it would be ART.

well done
5/5

Absolutely beautiful.

This poem has a medieval flavor to it which
makes it even more lovelier to read! The opening lines did not catch my attention but as I kept reading, it got better. Overall, liked
the write very much :)

I actually have to admit that I also like the first few lines, they were not as captivating as the rest, but they still caught my attention. Your choice of words fit really well to what you were saying and I like the powerful images you portray. The flow is smooth, which it underlines your words. What matters the most though is that the emotions seem really heartfelt and true, that makes this poem very meaningful.

Sometimes you pass through places in nature, you meet certain people, or you just get this short, sharp-felt sense of all being as it should be and at those moments in time you are comforted by this knowledge. Deep inside we all have the answers and we do know where we are going and that we are not alone. Reading your poem reminded me of that basic feeling of being loved and guided by the powers that rule us all.

Seasons pass, we seldom notice how we have not, love's flame
seldom dies, only proved, pulled blue by suffering winds.

^^
So beautifully put. My flame has been pulled blue so often, yet never died, nor will die until my time has come. it gives me peace of mind every time I am reminded of the strength that lies deep inside our hearts.

The true treasure is not the gold that gleams,
but the strength of your love.

^^
yes, the only real treasure is love, so right.

I really loved this poem for the wisdom that flowed from it and the wording that was very poetic.

Well done, Zach

5/5 Ingrid

Very wonderful poem :) I love love loved it it was greatly worded and a magnificent read :) very well done a fantastic peice :) 5/5

Your style of writing, is unique, beautiful, and your own. Your imagery! Ahh, breath o fresh air!

Your style of writing, is unique, beautiful, and your own. Your imagery! Ahh, breath o fresh air!

Lovely... I like this piece.... Like a song:)
Good piece:)

Beautiful poem...imagery, emotions and all! Well done!

I wish i had a gentle love.