Wow, this was so alluring..
You really have a talent as you nail each idea you discuss..
"I never was a faithful soul,
I followed many earthly goals.
I traveled roads of empty dreams,
Fueled by high and mighty schemes."
The opening was brilliant.. Up to the point,,, 'I followed many earthly goals..' - I wonder how much we do that per hour!
And it was epic the way you ended it:
"They chronicle the path I've trod,
From skeptic to a man of God,
Everything He shared with me
Is found within my poetry. "
'From skeptic to a man of God' - Awesome conclusion! ..
Again, the rhyming and wording were flawless!
SO MOVING!