Comments : Make Your Way to Shallow Waters

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Lol. Wonder where this idea came from!! I am glad u made a poem out of that, didn't expect it to be so serious. Lol. Now as far as the poem, it was awesome! I loved how the phrase became something symbolic! Nice write. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This poam is super awsome it show me how much you love writing i cant wait to read your next poam till then keep writing ps see my poams if you like to comment thats fine