Holy crap that was intence right from the heart awesome flow a perfect poem that i could read a million times 5/5 im def. gotta check out some of ur other works of art

I love the emotion in this :) very good

Wow..this startled me, Katie.

I am not sure if I ever told you, but I almost drowned when I was four years old. I was "away"for a few minutes and I have seen heaven. Because of that, I am not a believer in the traditional sense..I know. You are loved beyond your wildest imagination, sweet girl. Much of the anger you are feeling comes from feeling unable to do what you want to with our life, feeling helpless. You are loved, even when you don't love back.

I hope you will overcome whatever is troubling you, you are meant to shine, like all people in this great masquerade we call Life...make sure you enjoy it too and get behind the wheel;)

Love you!

*hugs*

Ingrid

Wow girl, this is very deep. you can feel the anger you feel as your reading this! Good job!
5/5

I really love it 5/5.

Crazy good, loved it!

Edgey!! I like it! F-Jesus! keep writing

GREAT!!!! work, loved it.

In the last line, you should put "slowly" before "dies". It'll help the flow. But this is an interesting poem.

All I can say is wow.
Growing up I used to feel the same way but it is better now.
But I love this.
I love the anger and passion.
It has a great flow but I agree with Kate....you should put slowly.
Other than that I love it a lot and I think you should keep up the good work. :) 5/5
~Dominique~ <3

Great flow and rhyme to this piece - and again, I relate to the content as many I'm sure do!

This is the first of your poems i've read....and i gotta say its freakin awesome, i love the tempo and energy in it I look forward to reading more from you.