This is such a....precious piece in my eyes.
You show the how the gift of life unfolds,
starting with the family's joy & love....
where a mother waits in the hospital
for her healthy baby to take home.
And then the story of a sweet girl blossoming...
the end is tragic, an innocent life taken so
coldly, bitterly.....and it is as if a family's life
falls apart. But there will be healing soon.

Powerful story.
God bless our lives.
Keep writing.

This is so true. I really like the progression in this piece. It really made the point that much stronger when one second you're imagining the joy of birth and the next the sadness of death. Great job. Def a 5/5