Not sure why there's no comment on this yet. This was a very beautiful poem with imagery that paints crystal clear pictures in my head. I could easily see what was going on in this nature scene you were envisioning or seing. Next is the form you use. I love how you try to write something so hard(the form) and yet write such a beautiful poem. :] The imagery is simple amazing and the emotions of awe and love for this scenery is felt.

In all, I really love this poem and all its properties. The simplistic nature of your poem is really good and the easy smooth flowing flow keeps the poem interesting and moving. Last you have shown your creativity with your lines with the unique creativity. Great job and keep writing!

Yet another form you have introduced to us
and I must say it is a hard one yet you have
written it with a beautiful painting of nature and a smooth flow..excellent write!

Its beautiful,you described change of a season for me in 7 lines lovely..

Bravo - excellant! I loved this work of yours and can only think that the reason more people have not left comments is because people may be stuck in another section unwilling to leave that comfort zone. Your work is excellant and I found it very well worded and I felt the emotion of each line. I did find the last sentence very fullfilling. thanks for your contribution.

Very dreamy poem filled with compelling natural imagery...nice poem!

This is a beautiful poem. I liked how you kept it short.

"Kissed by a wisp of gentle breeze
spring flowers swoon in an elegant ballet,
echoes, the rhythm of a silent stream"

^ My favorite part

5/5

Even though the poem didn't have to rhyme, you still managed to pull off a melodious effect with your words. It must be the flow and the images that just dance off the screen. A very special nature poem this is.