Comments : I Had A Dream You Were In

  • 13 years ago

    by Freeze Tyler

    These are actually true stories or true dreams. Just an FYI. Yes, I did dream that my friend was a ghost on a navel boat, and yes the carnival dream was a real dream.

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! This poem was long but so mesmerizing, I was engaged throughout! I love the repetition of "Yet again,
    I had a dream you were in..." and I must say I am very fascinated by dreams and their meanings. I really do believe that dreams can symbolize so many things, and I love to analyze my own dreams. I think that's part of why I really enjoyed this poem... I loved reading these various dreams you keep having about this person, and they all had their own symbolisms.

    I must say that this was my FAVORITE part:
    "In this dream the pages were empty, but the words still floated about.
    You walked into the room and swallowed the words that you meant,
    Puzzled I was as you handpicked only the most careful of words,
    Making sure not to even touch the word "love" .... perfectly written!!!

    Brilliant!

  • 13 years ago

    by Freeze Tyler

    Thank you! It's actually about all the girls that have affected my life, outside of family. It's about 7 important girl, and some of them have more than one dream, of course.

    But I'm glad you enjoyed it =D

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    Very well writen, sometimes I also write about my dreams I this is a very creative way of expressing yourself :)